Comments on: The Angel http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/ Dreams to Reality: A Sojourn Thu, 19 Aug 2010 10:22:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Hari http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-192 Hari Fri, 18 Apr 2008 17:54:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-192 @ hari vishnu:<br/>Thanks, man. :) Sindhya chechi really is a multifaceted personality. :)<br/><br/>@ miss small wonder:<br/>Thanks again. :) @ hari vishnu:
Thanks, man. :) Sindhya chechi really is a multifaceted personality. :)

@ miss small wonder:
Thanks again. :)

]]> By: Miss Small Wonder http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-191 Miss Small Wonder Fri, 18 Apr 2008 17:36:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-191 hari<br/>what an awesome story. initially i wondered at the post's length. but wen i finished it i was gapin at the entire story..n wonderin how it became so short...n how i finished so fast...<br/><br/>its more than wat i call "interesting". Hats off to you...u r an exceptional story writer...<br/><br/>wat a beautiful theme...an emotional buster too...hmmm...keep it up hari...kindly publish more stories. hari
what an awesome story. initially i wondered at the post’s length. but wen i finished it i was gapin at the entire story..n wonderin how it became so short…n how i finished so fast…

its more than wat i call “interesting”. Hats off to you…u r an exceptional story writer…

wat a beautiful theme…an emotional buster too…hmmm…keep it up hari…kindly publish more stories.

]]> By: Hari Vishnu http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-190 Hari Vishnu Fri, 18 Apr 2008 13:37:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-190 hehe.. i never knew sindya could write stories so well.. whenever i see her in IEEE related activities its in a serious manner.. man beautiful story.. ofcourse, its the narration that gives the package its full beauty :-0.. good work.. hehe.. i never knew sindya could write stories so well.. whenever i see her in IEEE related activities its in a serious manner.. man beautiful story.. ofcourse, its the narration that gives the package its full beauty :-0.. good work..

]]> By: Hari http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-189 Hari Thu, 17 Apr 2008 17:04:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-189 @ Sindhya:<br/>Thanks a bunch, chechi... :D<br/><br/>*<i>I definitely say your story is better than mine..</i><br/>That's just an illusion. Yours is way better. Period. :-)<br/><br/>@monsooner:<br/>Thanks! About the ambiguity thing, that you'd told me: I need to work on it.<br/><br/>@anon:<br/>Thanks. :D (Maybe I need to turn-off anonymous postings in my blog)<br/><br/>@Abhi:<br/>Well, there was a word missing at that sequence, which totally turned the tables. The *author*'s sur-name is ripped off from a name I found long back in an old novel of Dad's. Carl Northcutt is a maverick-oilman in the story. Creative immunity? Not quite. ;-) @ Sindhya:
Thanks a bunch, chechi… :D

*I definitely say your story is better than mine..
That’s just an illusion. Yours is way better. Period. :-)

@monsooner:
Thanks! About the ambiguity thing, that you’d told me: I need to work on it.

@anon:
Thanks. :D (Maybe I need to turn-off anonymous postings in my blog)

@Abhi:
Well, there was a word missing at that sequence, which totally turned the tables. The *author*’s sur-name is ripped off from a name I found long back in an old novel of Dad’s. Carl Northcutt is a maverick-oilman in the story. Creative immunity? Not quite. ;-)

]]> By: ~==[[[ Abhi ]]]==~ http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-188 ~==[[[ Abhi ]]]==~ Thu, 17 Apr 2008 14:57:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-188 Hey Hari awesome story man. U sure had me crying in th end. Felt so bad for shalini and also for her lack of friends because if she had some decent friends she'd hav not had such a bad end. Even though in th middle u made me feel lik th story is going towards a kavya vishwanathan style opal mehta makeover. Had some doubts though- lik how'd a bookworm(tht's th idea u gave) lik shalini see hbo? Also cutt northwho? U cd hav used some real name. Still creative immunity:) u write what u feel:) Hey Hari awesome story man. U sure had me crying in th end. Felt so bad for shalini and also for her lack of friends because if she had some decent friends she’d hav not had such a bad end. Even though in th middle u made me feel lik th story is going towards a kavya vishwanathan style opal mehta makeover. Had some doubts though- lik how’d a bookworm(tht’s th idea u gave) lik shalini see hbo? Also cutt northwho? U cd hav used some real name. Still creative immunity:) u write what u feel:)

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-187 Anonymous Thu, 17 Apr 2008 14:48:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-187 beautiful!!!!! <br/>You're narrative was awesome and the plot.. hats off young man!<br/>Too good... do come up with more. beautiful!!!!!
You’re narrative was awesome and the plot.. hats off young man!
Too good… do come up with more.

]]> By: monsooner http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-186 monsooner Thu, 17 Apr 2008 14:31:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-186 It's amazing to have such detailing in such a simple story, like ..."Her obese frame made running hard, but some newfound energy from within spurred her to run..."<br/><br/>As I said, I love fantasies and dreams, and needless to say, I loved that sequence.<br/>And, the death in the end. That's how I'd like my stories to be.<br/>I'd go with Sindy, ... you narrate the story so well, Hari. It’s amazing to have such detailing in such a simple story, like …”Her obese frame made running hard, but some newfound energy from within spurred her to run…”

As I said, I love fantasies and dreams, and needless to say, I loved that sequence.
And, the death in the end. That’s how I’d like my stories to be.
I’d go with Sindy, … you narrate the story so well, Hari.

]]> By: sindhya http://www.harishanker.net/2008/04/angel/comment-page-1/#comment-185 sindhya Thu, 17 Apr 2008 09:07:00 +0000 http://thethunderbolt.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/the-angel/#comment-185 Hari.. guess i m the first one to comment... My first thought when i started reading the post was its long.. dunno if il finish it in one go...<br/><br/>But once i started reading, i remember stopping only after i finished.. Your narrative skill is too good.. I definitely say your story is better than mine..<br/><br/>I do criticize when i comment.. Here i dont know what to say.. It was a very captivating story and too down to earth.. If my post made you write this then i m flattered.. Thats the best compliment i can get.. <br/><br/>Anyways good to c that even thought the mag committee doesnt accept my article at least some people appreciate it.. Hari.. guess i m the first one to comment… My first thought when i started reading the post was its long.. dunno if il finish it in one go…

But once i started reading, i remember stopping only after i finished.. Your narrative skill is too good.. I definitely say your story is better than mine..

I do criticize when i comment.. Here i dont know what to say.. It was a very captivating story and too down to earth.. If my post made you write this then i m flattered.. Thats the best compliment i can get..

Anyways good to c that even thought the mag committee doesnt accept my article at least some people appreciate it..

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